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First, it's a good idea to give this a gander. It's context. Context is good for the soul. [link]
Now I have a hella lot more respect for comic artists. This is the first real comic page I have done and... well, I would honestly love feedback and critique. Were the colors okay? Does the background look lazy? Does anything detract from the overall linear movement of the comic? I'm new at this so I honestly don't mind hearing your thoughts.
Anyways, this is just a brief practice comic to introduce me to how to make comics from scanning them in to photoshopping the crap out of them. There shall be cameos. Some may not be relevant to End Run.
That said, jeebus, Elliot. You see a girl walking around with a thousand pounds of paper wedged between her arms and you ask her if she's lost???? IB< I ough'ta toss ya to the feminists.
Lastly, the joke is the last panel is "Dapper Visionx1000" Because Autumn magically sprouted Angelina Jolie lips???
Autumn (c)
App: [link]
Elliot's app: [link]
Practice comic for
next page: [link]
Now I have a hella lot more respect for comic artists. This is the first real comic page I have done and... well, I would honestly love feedback and critique. Were the colors okay? Does the background look lazy? Does anything detract from the overall linear movement of the comic? I'm new at this so I honestly don't mind hearing your thoughts.
Anyways, this is just a brief practice comic to introduce me to how to make comics from scanning them in to photoshopping the crap out of them. There shall be cameos. Some may not be relevant to End Run.
That said, jeebus, Elliot. You see a girl walking around with a thousand pounds of paper wedged between her arms and you ask her if she's lost???? IB< I ough'ta toss ya to the feminists.
Lastly, the joke is the last panel is "Dapper Visionx1000" Because Autumn magically sprouted Angelina Jolie lips???
Autumn (c)
App: [link]
Elliot's app: [link]
Practice comic for
next page: [link]
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This looks good. ^ ^ Besides the Angelina Jolie lips, you've managed to keep the character consistant throughout the page, which is usually the hardest part for me. The background could use a little more detailing if it stood alone, but because the scenery's not the focus, it's just enough. I look forward to p. 2~!